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Nov 13, 2005 12:43:48 GMT -5
Post by CrystalFlames on Nov 13, 2005 12:43:48 GMT -5
Post your poems here!
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Nov 13, 2005 12:59:36 GMT -5
Post by CrystalFlames on Nov 13, 2005 12:59:36 GMT -5
I was making one for a homework thing and I really like it. I'm in a writing mood right now...What do you guys think? Am I great or am I great? Straight Jacket [/u] I cannot believe what I saw Nothing, yet everything No movement at all Not from the one on the cold, blue bench All bundled up in the white thick jacket A hideous smile apon their face Twitching in the darkness Laughing histerically Yet another lay beneath Convered in silky red blood "OMG!" thought the others, running by In that abbreviated way As I stood there, in the blackness of the night Pondering away "What if I were them?" I thought "What would I do?" "How would I play?" I would think, "Why?" In that strange maniac way Must have had a bad day I'd have thought about it first That's all I've got to say [/center]
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Nov 13, 2005 13:12:50 GMT -5
Post by theborg3of5 on Nov 13, 2005 13:12:50 GMT -5
wow... nice!
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Nov 13, 2005 13:13:20 GMT -5
Post by CrystalFlames on Nov 13, 2005 13:13:20 GMT -5
Thankies! ^_^
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Nov 15, 2005 19:28:48 GMT -5
Post by theborg3of5 on Nov 15, 2005 19:28:48 GMT -5
Great many origins, including Frank, France, England, and Scot,
And such an unusual name you might wonder where I got
Victorious in battle, Courageous, White Hawk of Battle,
Ideas are often useful,
New still to this world, being only fourteen.
”Dark Stranger” by name,
Original in many ways.
Unaware of many things in this world,
Guy who makes many friends,
Lenses are worn over his eyes,
Author of a few poems,
Seeks good grades in school.
Bear is a part of my name,
Owner of no pets.
Reads a lot and enjoys it much,
Goals are many in life.
ummm... yea... shcool poem there... an whats its called... acrostic poem of my name.
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Nov 15, 2005 19:58:25 GMT -5
Post by CrystalFlames on Nov 15, 2005 19:58:25 GMT -5
Ummm, nice. Not my favorite type of poem. Too easy for me. The first part was ok. Nice poem gav. ^^
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Nov 15, 2005 20:00:55 GMT -5
Post by theborg3of5 on Nov 15, 2005 20:00:55 GMT -5
thx... im not that great a poet
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Nov 15, 2005 20:05:06 GMT -5
Post by CrystalFlames on Nov 15, 2005 20:05:06 GMT -5
You are, but you just don't know it. ^^
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Nov 16, 2005 18:46:33 GMT -5
Post by theborg3of5 on Nov 16, 2005 18:46:33 GMT -5
ah!!!!! the accursed rhyme!!!
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Nov 23, 2005 15:49:45 GMT -5
Post by hypershadow22 on Nov 23, 2005 15:49:45 GMT -5
They are both good poems. I like'em. Here's a limerick that I wrote in like 4th or 5th grade.
There once was a boy named Ty Who loved to eat apple pie He stuffed his face At a really fast pace I hope he wont choke and die.
I like it. I think I got an A on it.
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Nov 23, 2005 15:52:55 GMT -5
Post by CrystalFlames on Nov 23, 2005 15:52:55 GMT -5
Lol! TJ, thats awsome!
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Nov 23, 2005 18:50:09 GMT -5
Post by theborg3of5 on Nov 23, 2005 18:50:09 GMT -5
lol! yea! really cool!
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Nov 23, 2005 20:53:26 GMT -5
Post by hypershadow22 on Nov 23, 2005 20:53:26 GMT -5
Thanks It still gets laughs. I wonder what I was thinking when I made this poem. I should try it again. But not right now.
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Dec 5, 2005 18:29:30 GMT -5
Post by Demonbob on Dec 5, 2005 18:29:30 GMT -5
Man I love pie. I could eat it til I die But then I have to sigh... as I have no pie.
YAY!
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