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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 7, 2005 18:59:09 GMT -5
This is my new and second pokemon story. The first one stinks. You don't need to read that. I'll make a new post for my story. Hope you all like it. I need to know which parts were ok or not so I can change them. The person in the story is half of me. The more evil half. Muahaha  And some of the other half. Anyways, just read it. |
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Post by LeprechaunKidd on Sept 7, 2005 19:00:00 GMT -5
I never read the first where was that at?
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 7, 2005 20:11:27 GMT -5
The Girl Who Wasn't [/b][/color] This story is dedicated to all my friends and Noah - to whom I think of always when writing.[/center] "Click! Today on Pokemonaholics: Ash Ketchem vs. Gary Oak in the Battle Stadium Finals!"
A girl at the age of 15 woke up with a startle. Her eyes slowly fell transfized on the collection of pokemon dolls on top of her desk. Suddenly she jumped up only to remember what today was.
"Oh no! I'm gonna be late!" She said running to get dressed. She wore a long-sleeved shirt that barely reached the end of her fingertips and had fire streaks all over. Her short shorts had pockets everywhere and it had a belt for her new pokemon with five pokeballs ready for action. The girl pulled up her long baggy socks as they fell back down, scrunched, apon her black tennis shoes. She reached over to her coat hanger and pulled from it a hooded black cloak and a small sling blackpack. Thumping came from the hallway as she finished getting ready for her quest.
"Are you ready yet Crystal?" came flowing into her room. The door opened and in came an older lady, in her 30's, with long brown hair and green eyes just as her child had.
"Yes I was just about to leave, mom." replied Crystal.
"Well I was going to give you something for your trip." said the mother as she held her hands out to reveal a small sack full of food. "Hope you have a great trip around the region."
"Don't worry, I will!" Crystal said as she hugged her mother good-bye and ran down the stairs, out of the door to the Professor's Lab.
When Crystal got up to the door she filled up with excitment. She slowly opened the door to the lab to see two people. Professor Elm and Gary Oak both were standing near a table with a couple pokeballs on it.
"G-Gary Oak!" she said studdering along. "W-What are you doing here?"
"Since I finished getting the Kanto badges and I beat the Elite 4, I wanted to start here in the Johto with my Umbreon, Moonlight. And you must be Crystal." answered the 15-year-old. "Why don't you get your starter first, then we can talk."
"Alright." she said nodding without taking her eyes off him.
Professor Elm suddenly said as he walked around the table letting out each pokemon as he called their names, "So, you want to start a pokemon journey to become a master, huh? Well here is what you can start out with: Chikorita, Cyndaquil, and Totodile."
"I would like a Cynaquil please." replied Crystal.
"Take good care of it. And here are a few pokeballs." exclaimed the professor.
"Thanks, I will!" she said taking the items and storing them in her backpack. She turned around and told the little Cyndaquil, "I'm going to be your new trainer and I'm gonna name you Ember." It nodded and Crystal picked up the fire pokemon and walked out the door.
MORE TO COME! Right now I have to sleep... |
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Post by LeprechaunKidd on Sept 7, 2005 20:16:39 GMT -5
WOW! most times i dont like to read but that was a great begining i really cant wait for the rest and im not just saying that cause you're my friend ;D
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 8, 2005 6:38:55 GMT -5
Really? Thanks! I think the rest of the story is alot better than the beginning. Do you think her clothes are ok?
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Post by Demonbob on Sept 8, 2005 8:41:39 GMT -5
yays the stories board is up!! I've read this part before...but its good! I'll post my story later, it sucks! |
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Post by LeprechaunKidd on Sept 8, 2005 17:03:04 GMT -5
well i did not take to much time thinking about the clothes (even though it made up most of the story) cause the story id what really counts
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Post by theborg3of5 on Sept 8, 2005 19:26:05 GMT -5
the story seems reely good so far! really!
the clothes are cool description, but i agree with wilkins.
keep it up!
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 8, 2005 19:55:07 GMT -5
CONTINUED....
"So a fire type?" Gary said as the two walked down the path to Cherrigrove City.
"Yeah, can't you tell it's my favorite?" She said giggling. "What did you start out with?"
"Gary! WAIT!" came a yell from behind. It was Professor Elm, running towards them carrying an Eevee. "I almost forgot that your grandpa, Pro. Oak, told me to give you this." He gave the pokemon to Gary and paused to catch his breath. "He thought you would have wanted one to go with your Umbreon."
"Thank you Professor." replied Gary, "Tell him I said thanks." Elm nodded and walked away smiling at the two.
"My first pokemon was the same as this one, and Eevee." he said looking at the Eevee. "Then it evolved into an Umbreon and I named it Moonlight.
Crystal's gaze fell from Gary's eyes and onto a small Sentret that was standing in the middle of the road. Gary followed her eyes to see the tiny pokemon ready to fight. Crystal quickly threw out her attack before the Sentret had time to run.
"Ember tackle now!" she exclaimed.
The Cyndaquil jumped out of her arms and ran straight for it. Just as Ember got close the ferret-like pokemonran out of the way, turned, and charged at the opponent.
"Tackle again Ember!" she said.
The attacks collided and they hit each other. Apparently the Sentret had fainted since it was lying on the ground with X's over it's eyes. The Cyndaquil ran back to the trainer and jumped into her arms getting comfortable. "Great job Ember." Crystal mumbled as she stroked her pokemon.
"That was awesome." said Gary approvingly. "A one-hit K-O!"
"And that's how I like it." she replied with a smirk. After all she was a sweeper. One who doesn't mess around with stats but charges full blast at the opponent knocking them out as fast as they can.
Soon the two finally got to their destination, Cherrigrove City.
"Why hello there!" exclaimed an old man. "You must be newcomers. I must take you on a little tour of our little village." He pushed them along showing them the Pokemon Center, the Pokemart and his own house. The gentleman handed each a small card and said, "These are Map Cards. They're for your Poke Gears." Then he disapeared into his house.
"Ok, one word....weird!" Crystal said out loud.
"Yeah, and a little creapy." Gary said smiling. "Hey why don't we go and heal your pokemon at the Pokemon Center?"
"Good idea Gary." she replied.
"Hello, would you like to heal your pokemon?" Nurse Joy asked as they entered the building.
"Yes please." Crystal answered politely handing Ember to the lady.
Nurse Joy walked away with the pokemon and vanished behind the quite large doors, which lead to the machines that healed the pokemon.
"Um, Crystal would you like to accompany me on my pokemon journey? I could sure use a buddy."
"Aww, I see that Gary has another girlfriend. What's a pretty girl like you doing with a dweeb like him?" said a cold voice from behind.
Gary turned around and said, "Stay outta this Ash!"
Ash and his two friends stood behind him and suddenly the male came up to Crystal and said, "Hi, my name's Brock. What's your name? Do you have a boyfriend?"
The girl behind the guys quickly took Brock away by the ear.
"Not the ear Misty!" he screamed.
Crystal giggled at the sight of this. Then she felt a tug on her shoe laces. She looked down and saw an adorable little Pikachu.
"Cute! A Pikachu!" Crystal exclaimed. She picked it up and it cuddled with her. It then jumped out of her and into Ash's arms.
"So you like him? he sure does like you." said Ash.
"He's adorable!" exclaimed Crystal.
"Why don't you forget about Gary over there and you come with me instead?" he asked.
She thought for a minute but the answer came to her very quickly. "You almost got me with that Pikachu but nice try. You're pretty smart for a guy, trying to lure me with a cute pokemon. But I think I'll stick with Gary. He found me first." she said with a giggle.
"Thanks Nurse Joy!" Crystal said as the nurse gave back the pokemon. She took it and Gary by the hand and walked out of the pokemon center.
"And you're cuter." whispered Crystal.
With that Gary turned his head out of sight and blushed.
"Well there's nothing here so lets more on." said Gary.
"Ok, sure, lets go." she replied. And they left to go on. |
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Post by LeprechaunKidd on Sept 9, 2005 14:07:22 GMT -5
Wow, lol thats funny all those guys hitting on you ;D and treating you like an object, and Ash acted more like Gary and Gary acted more like Ash
Good Chapter Two ;D
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Post by Demonbob on Sept 9, 2005 16:19:42 GMT -5
lol ya i read this at school, and uh....yeah you'll see why i stopped reading for a while lol  |
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Post by theborg3of5 on Sept 9, 2005 17:11:59 GMT -5
cool ch. 2!
good humor 2!
cya soon!
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 10, 2005 11:27:54 GMT -5
Thanks guys, here comes the next part. Actually I dont have chapters, I call them parts but you guys can call them chapters.
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 10, 2005 13:07:56 GMT -5
"According to my new map card Mr. Pokemon's house got moved right next to the road. We should stop and visit him." said Gary.
"Alright!" Crystal exclaimed.
About five minutes later they came up to a house and out popped a tiny Hoppip.
"After you." said Gary slighty bowing.
"A pleasure." she replied. "Go Ember, use tackle!"
Crystal put her fire pokemon down and it ran toward Hoppip. The wild pokemon didn't move and got hit. It looked very weak but suddenly started glowing.
"What the?" she whispered to herself.
It stopped, returned to normal, and looked refreshed.
"I think I've got a problem Gary." Crystal yelled over to her friend.
"Use Ember." he said.
"I am!" she replied confused.
"The attack Crystal." he said laughing.
"Oh," she said giggling. "Ember, use Ember!"
Flames came out of it's mouth and shot right at the grass pokemon. It looked left, then right, barely moved, and got hit in the face. It fainted and Ember jumped gleefully into the air.
"Great job Ember!" exclaimed Crystal. She walked over to the Cyndaquil, picked it up, and waited for Gary to catch up. "Thanks Gare!"
"That was great!" said a voice over by the house which they two just noticed.
"Grandpa, hi!" exclaimed Gary waving to Professor Oak.
"Thanks Professor." replied Crystal.
"I have something to give you Crystal. It's a pokedex." he said handing the red item to her.
"Awesome, thanks again!" she said.
"I would like for you to try and find as many different pokemon as you can. If you see a new one, the pokedex will automatically upload it's data." explained the Professor.
"Alright, I will." she responded.
"It's getting dark, do you think we could stay here for the night grandpa?" asked Gary.
"Sure, but Mr. Pokemon is off researching and this is a one room house. We'll have to sleep on the furnature for some reason Mr. Pokemon has no bed." Oak said laughing.
"That's ok, I need to get used to it." said Crystal.
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"That was great Crystal!" Gary said rubbing his stomache. "I haven't been this full since my mom cooked."
"Thanks, my mom says I cook the best burgers." replied Crystal.
RING! RING! RING!
"Hello? Really? Alright, I'll be there!" said Oak from across the room. He came up to the kids and told them that Professor Elm found an egg and thinks it could be a new pokemon. The two both looked at each other excitedly.
"So I must leave imediatly." he ended. "You guys can stay here if you still want."
"Ok, but we'll probably be gone in the morning." said Gary.
"Ok, then I'm off!" replied the Professor as he picked up a bag and hurried out the door.
"So," Gary said looking at his watch, turning, and setting up a bed on the floor. "Time for bed and we have to get up early tomorrow."
Crystal nodded and jumped on the couch. "i get the couch!" she yelled laughing.
"Alright, but don't get used to it." Gary replied.
"Good night Gary." said Crystal.
"Good night Crystal." he replied.
And with that Crystal lay into a peacefull rest.
Crystal woke up with a startle and realized what she just saw. She had a horrible dream, well it was almost a dream, it seemed so life-like. She dreamed that everyone around her was running. All of the people near screamed and pointed at her. She went to a lake and saw that she was a gaint monster. Except for the fact that she was blackish and her flame was blue, she looked like a huge Charizard. Then instinct took over and she flew off towards a tall building. She soon noticed that she couldn't control what she was doing. Crystal flew to the top of the building and stopped to pick up what looked like....Gary! he got on her back and they took off, plunging towards the ground. She landed and Gary got off. Anyone who came close to the two of them she put up her wings trying to scare away the humans. It seemed like she was almost protecting Gary.
(END OF DREAM)
She sat up straight. For some reason she was scared. then nearby Crystal heard a TV on and saw Gary sitting there looking bored. Crystal got up slowly and walked over to Gary and sat down making him jump.
"Can't sleep." she told him.
"Me either." Gary replied handing her a pillow. "Here lie down next to me, close you eyes and clear your mind. You'll fall asleep." He shut off the TV and scooted a little closer to Crystal. She closed her eyes and tried to clear her mind but couldn't stop thinking about her dream.
"I know it's hard to not think about anything when you just get your first pokemon, try again." Gary gently placed his hand on hers. Soon her mind erased and she had a warm sensation running though her body. Gary smirked at her reaction and the two fell asleep.
(Yeah, yeah, yeah, I was in the mood. )
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Post by LeprechaunKidd on Sept 10, 2005 15:44:11 GMT -5
Now that was just sad what is this some love story  i didn't come here to read how in love you are with some cartoon character, maybe Gary shouldn't be in the story, now its talking to much about gary and crystals romance *sick* Other than that, that chapter was pointless |
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Post by theborg3of5 on Sept 10, 2005 16:31:02 GMT -5
lol...if u were in the mood, fine...
but can u get bak out of the mood soon?
*not a huge fan of love stories*
still cool tho!
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 10, 2005 16:31:42 GMT -5
Matt tried to warn you. And I am NOT in love with some cartoon caracter! That Crystal isn't me, I just like that name. I use it way too much. lol, besides there's nothing wrong with a pokemon love story, I read one and it motivated me to write this one. It was like the best pokemon spin off story I've read! I'm a girl, girls sometimes get into those moods... -.- deal with it.
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Post by LeprechaunKidd on Sept 10, 2005 16:39:17 GMT -5
ok what ever you say cartoon lover ;D
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Post by theborg3of5 on Sept 10, 2005 17:29:35 GMT -5
whateva...i reely dont mind...  |
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Post by Demonbob on Sept 11, 2005 11:11:53 GMT -5
im confused, but the story is good.  |
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 11, 2005 11:43:00 GMT -5
Thank you! At least someone is nice!
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Post by theborg3of5 on Sept 13, 2005 19:39:09 GMT -5
hey... im not trying to b mean... srry if i sounded mean tho... do whateva u want! *sulks*  oooooo... kewl new smilys btw... |
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 14, 2005 6:38:44 GMT -5
Thanks, Matt put em there. Don't ask me how to do it, I have no idea....  lol |
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Post by theborg3of5 on Sept 14, 2005 15:04:32 GMT -5
ok i reely dont care how they got there..
but they r kewl!
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Post by CrystalFlames on Sept 17, 2005 18:59:46 GMT -5
CONTINUED...
"C' mon Crystal, you've had enough time to get your things ready. We have to go." Gary explained. "Or else we'll miss the...uh...battle in Violet City!"
"I'm coming, I just need to get my cape and we'll leave." She replied. She picked up her stuff, put on her cape, and walked out the door that Gary held open. The two set off on the down the road but soon cam a small kid crying.
"What's wrong little guy?" Crystal asked kneeling down to the boy's size.
"I *sob* lost my Bulbasaur and it *sniff* doesn't know this place yet. I just got it!" cried the kid.
"Dont worry we'll help you find your pokemon, right Gary?" she asked.
He looked at his watch and responded, "Ok, but quickly please."
They searched around for about five minutes and finally a lady came down the road holding a bulbasaur.
"Hello, are you Mike?" she asked the boy.
"yes, and you found bulbasaur! Thank you!" he said taking it and headed off after thanking the others.
"I saw what you did back there and that was really nice of you." said the girl "My name's Maria, you wanna battle?"
"Sure, but I only got one pokemon." Crystal replied holding up Ember.
"Thats ok, then I'll only use one also." she smiled. "Go Beautifly!" Maria threw a ball into the air and out came a beautiful butterfly.
"Ember go! Use tackle while using ember!" Crystal called out.
"beautifly use silver wind!" Maria exclaimed.
Ember's attack did a load of damage and Beautifly could barely stay in the air. Ember easily dodged the opponent's attack.
"Now Ember, finish it off with another ember attack!" Crystal yelled.
The Beautifly fainted and Maria called her pokemon back.
"Nice job kid. See ya!" with that she ran off into the distance.
"Come on Crystal! We're gonna be late!" Gary said grabbing her hand and ran down the pathway to Violet City.
TO BE CONTINUED..... |
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